The Forgotten - Part One
Kudos and thanks to Katie who has agreed to beta this for me This one's gonna take time, so please be patient The Forgotten - Part One Carol couldnt honestly say when she first laid eyes on the small...
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I too love the idea. Can't wait for more. The descriptions of the traffic, the cemetery and the surroundings were just superb.tamsin
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What an intriguing beginning, Cam!! I can't wait to see where you go with this!!!!!
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I was intrigued by this idea the first time you mentioned it in the chat room. It's gotten off to a superb beginning and I have to say--I remember your first story and you have really grown as a...
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I love it already, Cam! A fascinating premise and a truly wonderful start. Consider me hooked and along for the duration!
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Interesting start! I am eager to see where this goes and if we will learn all the fates of our favourite Barkleys. The sadest part of any graveyard is the graves of young children. You painted a...
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What an interesting, different beginning.Looking forward to seeing how it goes on.
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Great start Cam! Your description of the scenery and the weather is super. Can't wait for the rest.
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Ooooh! What a wonderful premise! I can hardly wait to more! Glad to see your name again, Cam.
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Suzanne--This story is magnificent--and I hope it's very long--just hope you post daily!! You described the neglected little graveyard to perfection--I've tramped many, many of them over the years!...
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The headstones were old and overgrown with grass and weeds; the plot was apparently forgotten and unattended. Sadness welled up within her inexplicably at the thought of the graves being neglected....
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Lordy, I haven't been over here in a while, so pardonez-moi, dear Suze, for the lateness of my post! This is even more poignant after our last discussion on "the disposition."Autumn is my favorite...
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